{"id":1741,"date":"2015-03-02T08:00:20","date_gmt":"2015-03-02T08:00:20","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/?p=1741"},"modified":"2020-05-15T14:23:50","modified_gmt":"2020-05-15T13:23:50","slug":"from-dreaming-to-publishing-4-proportion","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/from-dreaming-to-publishing-4-proportion\/","title":{"rendered":"From Dreaming to Publishing: Proportion"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/12\/from-dreaming-to-publishing-4.jpg?resize=580%2C386\" alt=\"from-dreaming-to-publishing-1\" width=\"580\" height=\"386\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-1736\" \/><\/p>\n<p><em>This post is part of the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/?s=From+Dreaming+to+Publishing\">&#8220;From Dreaming to Publishing&#8221; series<\/a><\/em>.<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Don&#8217;t focus your reader&#8217;s attention on ordinary things<\/li>\n<li>Don&#8217;t fill all the details, let your readers&#8217; imagination fill the gaps, e.g. &#8220;The phone rang. &#8216;Hello&#8217;, John said.&#8221; (no need to describe how John got to the phone)<\/li>\n<li>The more time you spend on describing, the more importance you&#8217;re giving it<\/li>\n<li>You can take advantage and mislead the reader into a plot twist, e.g. describe a character using a victim point of view and later revel he&#8217;s the aggressor<\/li>\n<li>Your character&#8217;s viewpoint should control the level of detail, e.g. if he&#8217;s running the surroundings are just a blur<\/li>\n<li>Make sure everything you write either develops the character or your narrator, otherwise it&#8217;s just filling<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3>Checklist<\/h3>\n<ul>\n<li>Review your descriptions. Would your character notice that?<\/li>\n<li>Now review your last 50 pages. Do they develop a character or place? Are they that relevant?<\/li>\n<li>Do you have tangents (subplots) that don&#8217;t advance the main plot? 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