{"id":1740,"date":"2015-02-16T08:00:20","date_gmt":"2015-02-16T08:00:20","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/?p=1740"},"modified":"2020-05-15T14:23:50","modified_gmt":"2020-05-15T13:23:50","slug":"from-dreaming-to-publishing-3-narrators","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/from-dreaming-to-publishing-3-narrators\/","title":{"rendered":"From Dreaming to Publishing: Narrators"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/12\/from-dreaming-to-publishing-3.jpg?resize=580%2C386\" alt=\"from-dreaming-to-publishing-1\" width=\"580\" height=\"386\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-1736\" \/><\/p>\n<p><em>This post is part of the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.diogonunes.com\/blog\/?s=From+Dreaming+to+Publishing\">&#8220;From Dreaming to Publishing&#8221; series<\/a><\/em>.<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\n<p><strong>1st person<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>The good: intimacy, feelings, attachment of the reader to the character<\/li>\n<li>The bad: reduced perspective, biased world, one time\/place storyline<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<p><strong>Omniscient<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>The good: know-all, more detail, multiple storylines<\/li>\n<li>The bad: cold voice, too analytical<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<p><strong>3rd person<\/strong> is the balance and mix of the two; the language and the knowledge shows which type of narrator is speaking<\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<blockquote>\n<p>Omniscient narrator &#8220;hears a motor noise&#8221;.<br \/>\n  The 1st person narrator &#8220;hears the distinct roar of a Mustang B32&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>Omniscient narrator sees &#8220;a smothering landscape&#8221;.<br \/>\n  The 1st person narrator sees &#8220;the greenest field&#8221;.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h3>Checklist<\/h3>\n<ul>\n<li>Which point of view do you use the most? 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